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July 28, 2013

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Have a nice holiday, Simon!
Thank you very much for updating this blog. Your blog is very useful!

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wish u a happy holidays........enjoy alot.......

Happy holiday Simon. !

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Happy holidays, dear Simon. :)

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Have a great holiday Simon

DEAR SIMON,
HAVE A ENJOYABLE HOLIDAY WITH SUNSHINE. .

hi friends please comment on my essay.

enjoy in your holiday....

Enjoy ur holiday

topic .. AS COUNTRIES HAVE DEVELOPED THERE HAS BEEN A TREND TOWARDS SMALLER FAMILY SIZES. WHY DOES THIS HAPPEN? HOW DOES THIS AFFECT SOCIETY?

Nowadays, people from different developed countries prefer a small family and they happily live their entire life in a nuclear family. This is on trend due to number of reasons.Firstly, it reduces family expenses. Secondly, it provides family with better future. Thirdly, it reduces conflicts and tensions among family members. This affects a lot our society but in a good way which includes cutting population statistics down,reduces crime rate as well as increases opportunities for better education and employment.


To begin with,nuclear families directly decline population.Less number of family members means less population.Increasing population is a root cause of every social problem such as crime, unemployment and so on. Thus smaller families bring more social security. For example countries like Canada have increased number of nuclear and lone parent families from the last few decades. We can easily see how this strategy works in Canada, so the other nations are also trying it well.

In addition, it has several more advantages such as it opens a door of opportunities for better education as well as for good employment. This reduces crime too.Because there is no need to commit an offence when people will have their every need fulfilled.So there will be less violence in the society. For instance, Indian government is stressing its brain on how to control peaking population because this is the only thing to taken under consideration before planning to lessen crime rates.If the population get down once it will be possible for the policemen to catch offenders and sentenced them. This is greatly needed in India because crime reaches a new peak everyday there. Delhi gang rape is an excellent example to fit in this scenario.


In conclusion, small families not only give birth to a few children but also to a better society.

Have a wonderful adventure!

Have a great times, Simon!

Have fun Simon , u deserve the best.:-) :-) :-)

Enjoy your holidays, Simon!

Have A Nice Holiday (^.^)

HAVE A NICE HOLIDAY

Have a nice holidays.

Have a great holiday Simon

Enjoy your break, Simon!

To All,
Since there won't be any new lessons from Simon this week, you should take this opportunity to review past lessons and try to understand them all. I've noticed that many of your questions/concerns/doubts have already been answered/discussed in previous posts, so just use the SEARCH feature to look for the answer/advice!

Cheers,
Martin

have a fantastic holiday simon ..
take care we are waiting you !

regards
free3man

HAPPY HOLIDAY,SIMON!

Thanks Martin,

Do you mind if I send you a sample of writing (Part 2) ?

I don't have a chance to take private lessons and I am planning to improve it by myself.

Sevil

Hi Sevil,

Please post your essay here so that others can learn something new from you. I normally don't do this, but since you are trying to improve from band 7 to 8, I will try to give you some general comments/advice.

Regards,
Martin

Hi Simon,

You are doing a fantastic job for the IELTS students.

Happy Holiday

Thanks For all your supports.

Regards
Kiran

Happy hoildays Simon

Good luck! Have a nice holiday! Simon!

have lots of fun and enjoy.

ENJOY YOUR HOLIDAY SIMON!

have a fantastic holiday Simon!


Regards
Jone

Have a nice holiday! Simon!

Have a nice holiday simon sir
Enjoy...

I am happy to say that because of your website I have passed my ielts with band 7 and started studying of ORE exam for dentists

May god bless u all the time

The only thing I want to say to everyone is that I got 5.5 in writing first time 6.5 second time and 7 in the third time
I have not done any practise writing any topic or graphs .. I have studied and memorised all the things u have send and ur ebook
Which helped me to get these scores...

Thank u very much simon sir

Have a nice holiday, Simon

have a happy holiday!

Hi Simon,
I am Amy, and I already received your ebook, it is great. I will take IELTS on 17th Aug. Recently I saw a writing topic for task 2 on internet, which I feel it is pretty hard to think about any ideas, can you or anyone help me please?
I really appreciate you time.
Cheers
Amy

Sorry the topic I mentioned before is: Over the past fifty years, young people have been gaining the status and power lost by elderly people. What are the causes of this trend? Is this a positive or a negative development?

Thanks again

Hi simon
I feel so confused after reading some grammar topics . You use " whereas" and " while" in the middle of some sentences before a comma. I know that they are subordinate conjunctions;according to the rules of using SC, we have to write : clause + SB+ clause.
Please give me the reasons why.
Thank you so much
P/s : could you send your answers to my email box
Phuongtl1110@gmail.com

FROM SIMON:

Thanks for your holiday wishes. I had a very relaxing week off, but it's also nice to get back to normal!

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