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1. were given
2. with 1200 complaints.
3. the period of decreasing.
4. are the most problem
5. statically

The graph illustrates the nummber of complaints given to the environmental health organization .
Complaints caused by domestic noise peaked at 1200 in the year 1996 .
The number of complaints to roadworks remained the same / unchanged .
Most of the noise was generated by domestic household .

  1. gave >>> were given
  2. by 1200 >>> at 1200
  3. period decreasing >>> decreasing period
  4. the most problem >>> the major problem
  5. was remained >>> remained

1.The graph shows the amount of complaints received by the Environmental Health Organisation.

2. Complaints caused by domestic noise peaked at 1200 in 1996.

3. The period of decreasing ended in the complaints of roadworks.

4. Domestic household is the greatest source of noise.

5. The number of complaints to roadworks remained the same

The graph shows the number of complaints to Environmental Health Organisation.
The volume of complaints about domestic noise were at the peak in 1996, at 1200
The number of complaints about road maintenance during the period was decreasing.
The domestic household problem is the major source of noise.
The number of complaints about roadworks was remained unchanged.

1. were given to
2. with 1200 complaints.
3. the decreasing period
4. The domestic household is the biggest causes of noise.
5. The number of complaints to roadworks remained static.

The graph shows the number of complaints given to the Environmental Health Organisation
Complaints due to domestic noise were at the top in 1996, with 1200 complaints
The complaints about roadworks finished in the period decrease
The domestic household is the major problem that causes noise
The number of complaints about roadworks remained stable.

In this September I am going to study 1 foundation course in England. Now, my IELTS score is 6.5 in general and 6.0 in writing so I want to ask that how can I practise for college writing. Should I continue to do IELTS writing or do some other task?

1. complaints made..
2. were on the top list in 1996,with 1200 complaints.
3. The complaints of roadworks decreased by the finishing period.
4. The domestic household,which causes the most noise problem.
5. The number of complaints to roadworks were remained static.

The number of roadwork complaints were remained static.

The domestic household caused the most noise problem.

1. The graph shows the number of complaints received by Environmental Health Organization.

2. Domestic noise, with 1200 complaints, was at the top of the list in terms of the numbers of complaints.

3. Complaints about finished roadwork (?) decreased.

4. The main cause of the noise was those made from/by household.
(I didn’t understand, what exactly meant by “domestic household” )

5. The number of complaints related to roadwork remained unchanged.

-The graph indicates number of complaints lodged with the environment health organisation.

- In year 1996, 1200 complaints were reported due to domestic noise, the highest in that year.

- the main cause of domestic noise is result of many people living in a single house.

- complaints in relation to the roadworks remained same throughout the years

1. The graph represents the number of complaints which were sent to the Environmental Health Organisation
2. Complaints due to domestic noise reached the top in 1996, at 1200 complaints
3. The complaints of roadworks at the end of the period were decreasing.
4. The domestic household is the top reason that causes noise.
5. The number of complaints to roadworks remained stable.

1.The graph shows the number of complaints were given to the Environmental Health Organisation.
2. Due to domestic noise, complaints were peaked at 1200 complaints.
3. The complaints of roadworks finished decreasing during the period .
4. The domestic household is the most important problem causing noise.
5. The number of complaints to roadworks remained static/ unchanged


- The graph shows how many complaints were given to Environmental Health Organisation
- Complaints from domestic noise saw the highest figure in 1996, with 1200 complaints.
- The complaints of roadworks showed a decrease over the last period of time
- The domestic household was the most problematic noise
- The number of complaints from roadworks remained static

1. gave-given
2.The complains received on domestic household were highest in 1996, with 1200 cases in total.
3. The complaints of road works finished the period is decreasing.
4.The domestic household is the major problem that causes noise
5.The number of complaints on road works remained the same.

This is my answers. Actually, I don't understand the meaning of the third sentence.

1. The graph shows how many complaints were given to the Environmental Health Organisation.
2. Complaints due to domestic noise were at the top in 1996, at 1200 complaints.
3. The complaints of roadworks finished the decreasing period.
4. The domestic household was the major factor causing noise.
5. The number of complaints to roadworks remained stable/steady/constant.


1. The graph shows how many complaints given to the Environmental Health Organisation.
2. Complaints due to domestic noise were at the top in 1996, with 1200 complaints.
3. The complaints of roadworks finished the decreasing period.
4. The domestic household is the main reason that causes noise.
5. The number of complaints about roadworks remained static.

1. gave > were given
2. by > with
3. during the period decreased
4. most > largest
5. remained stable/static

This is my answer, I can not understand No.3 too.

1. The graph shows how many complaints are gave to the Environmental Health Organisation
2. Complaints about domestic noise were reach to the peel in 1996,with 1200 complaints.
3. The complaints of roadworks was decreasing at the end of the period
4. The domestic household is the largest reason which causes noise
5. The complaint number of roadwork remained stablely

ANSWERS FROM SIMON:

First, I'll try to explain the problems:

1. We don't say "give a complaint", we say "make a complaint".

2. Don't use "at the top". We also need "at" instead of "by" before the number.

3. We don't say "complaints of", we say "complaints about". I would also change the phrase "finished the period".

4. "the most problem" is grammatically incorrect.

5. "was remained" is wrong - it shouldn't be in the passive.

FROM SIMON (continued):

Here are my sentences:

1. The graph shows how many complaints WERE MADE to the Environmental Health Organisation.

2. Complaints due to domestic noise PEAKED in 1996, AT 1200.

3. The number of complaints ABOUT roadworks DECREASED TOWARDS THE END OF THE PERIOD.

4. Domestic household noise caused the highest number of complaints.

5. The number of complaints ABOUT roadworks remained stable.


Simon,

Thank you very much for the valuable lesson.

No problem Jing!

Hi Simon
My ans is -
1) the graph shows about the different types of complaints given by the environmental health organisation .
2)complaints due to domestic noise had been risen by 1200 in 1996
3)the number of complaints about the roadworks decreased at the end of the period.
4) the domestic house hold is the highest cause of noise problems
5)the number of complaints of household works remained stable.

Simon pls correct my sentences pls....

Hi,Simon
I have a question about task1 that needs your answer. Whether 'The figure for...' can be replaced by 'the rate of...' And ' the data of...'?

It is really confusing. Look forward to your answer, thank u!

Betty,

I'll try to make a lesson about 'figure, rate, data' etc.

Thnks sir..
I did not able to make simple sentences, now I m learing how to make eaisly understandable sentences in task 1.
Thank you very much. .

1. The graph shows how many complaints given to the Environmental Health Organisation.

2. Complaints due to domestic noise were at the top in 1996, at 1200 complaints.

3. The complaints about roadworks decreased till the end of the period.

4. The domestic household is the main problem that causes noise.

5. The number of complaints to roadworks remained statically.

The graph shows how many complaints were made to the Environmental Health Organisation.
Complaints due to domestic noise were the highest in 1996, at 1200.
The complaints about roadworks has stopped in decreasing
Domestic household caused the highest complaints of noise.
The number of complaints about roadworks remained static.

The graph shows how many complaints were given to the Environmental Health Organisation.
The complaints due to domestic noise peaked in 1996, at 1200.
The number of complaints about roadworks decreased towards the end of the period.
The domestic household causes most noise problems.
The number of complaints about roadworks remained steady.

Hi Simon
is there any difference between using "at" or "with" before a number?

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