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in 1999, the highest numbers of sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas in Switzerland were 3 million Euros and 15 million Euros respectively.

In 1999, Switzerland experienced the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas with 3 and 15 million Euros, respectively.

in 1999, the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas in Switzerland were 3 and 15 million Euros respectively.

In the year 1999, the highest sales figures for Fairtrade coffee and bananas was recorded in Switzerland, at 3 million Euros and 15 million Euros respectively

In year 1999, Switzerland was earning 15 miillion euros of fairtrade banana and 3 million euro of fairtrade coffee.

By 1999,the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee in Switzerland was 3 million euro, while for banana sales was 15 million euro.

By 1999.Switzerland had achieved the highest rate of sales for fair trade coffee and bananas,at 3 millions and 15 millions euros respectively.

In 1999 , Switzerland had the highest numbers of sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas , with 3 and 15 million Euros respectively .

The sales amounts of fairtrade coffee and bananas reached the highest points in 1999 in Switzerland with 3 millions and 15 millions respectively.

In 1999, the sales of Fairtrade coffee and banana in Switzerland peaked at 3 million and 15 million euros, respectively

In Switzerland the highest sale product was Fairtrade bananas and coffee with 15 and 3 millions euros respectively in 1999.

By 1999, Switzerland had saw the highest product sale, 15 million euros of fairtrade bananas and 3 million euros of coffee respectively.

Switzerland was the country with the highest sales for fair trade coffee and bananas in 1999. While the sales of fair trade banana stood at 15 million Euros, the sales figure for coffee was only 3 million Euros.

Sorry, Here is my one sentence writing.

Switzerland was the country with the highest sales for fairtrade coffee and bananas, with the sales figures for coffee and bananas stood at 3 million Euros and 15 million Euros respectively.

Switzerland saw the highest sales for fairtrade coffee and bananas, selling for three million Euros and fifteen million Euros respectively.

The sales of fairtrade coffee and banana in Switzerland has reached to Euros 3 million and Euros 15 million in year 1999 respectively.

The highest sales of fairtrade coffee and banana in Switzerland have reached to Euros 3 million and Euros 15 million in year 1999 respectively.

In 1999, Switzerland got the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas, with 3 million euros in coffee compared to 15 million euros in banana.

In 1999, Switzerland saw the highest sales for fair trade coffee and bananas, at 3 million and 15 million euros respectively.

In year 1999, Switzerland saw the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas, at 3 million Euros and 15 million Euros respectively.

In 1999,Switzerland had the highest Fairtrade labelled coffee and banana sales at 3 million euros and 15 million euros respectively.

In Switzerland, the highest sales is coffee and bananas at 3 million euros and 15 million euros,respectively in 1999.

During1999,in Switzerland,the highest sales of Faretrade for coffee and banana were 3 million and 15 million Euros respectively

In Switzerland,during 1999,the highest Faretrade sale for coffee and banana were 3 and 15 million Euros respectively

In 1999, Swizerland was the country having the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas with 3 million Euros for Fairtrade coffee sales volume and 15 million Euros for Fairtrade banana one.

In 1999, Switzerland experienced the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas with 3 and 15 million Euros respectively.

in 1999, Switzerland had the highest sales of fair trade and bananas at 3 and 15 million euro, respectively.

In the Year 1999, Fairtrade, Switzerland,recorded its highest coffee and banana sales of 3 million euros and 15 million euros respectively.

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In 1999, Switzerland had recorded the highest fairtrade coffee and banana of 3 millions and 5 millions euros respectively.

Dear Simon,

This is my answer:

In 1999, Switzerland saw the highest saless of Fairtrade coffee and bananas, at 15 million and 3 million Euros respectively.

1. In the year 1999, in Switzerland, there were the highest sales Fairtrade coffee and bananas with 3 million Euros and 15 million Euros respectively.
2. In the year 1999, sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas of Switzerland peaked at 3 million Euros and 15 million Euros respectively.

The highest sales for fairtrade coffee and bananas in Switzerland was in 1999, which accounted for 13 million and 15 million respectively.

In 1999, the sales for Fairtrade coffee and bananas peaked at 3 million and 15 million respectively in Switzerland.

In 1999, coffee and bananas reached its highest sales of Fairtrade in Switzerland, which is 3 million Euros and 15 million Euros respectively

In 1999, Switzeland's market witnessed an increase to the highest sales in fairtrade of coffee and bananas, with 3 million euros and 15 million euros respecticularly.

in the year 1999, Switzerland was the highest sales in fairtrade of coffe and banana,with 3 million euros and 15 million euros respectively.

In 1999, Switzerland saw the highest sales of coffee and bananas in Fairtrade, with revenue being 3 million and 5 million Euros respectively.

Switzerland has the highest Fairtrade sales of coffee and bananas in 1999, respectively amounting at 3 million and 5 millions euros.

In 1999, the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas were recorded in Switzerland, with 3 million Euros and 15 million Euros for coffee and banana respectively.

In 1999, Switzerland witnessed the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas with the amount of 3 and 5 million Euros respectively.

During 1999, the highest sales in Switzerland were Fairtrade coffee and bananas . people bought form Fairtrade coffee 3 million Euros . While , Fairtrade banana sales peaked to 5- fold million Euros

In 1999, the sales of Fairtrade coffe and bananas reached the highest in Swizerland,which was 3 million Euros and 15 million respectively.

In Switzerland,the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee is 3 million Euros in 1999,while the bananas is 15 million Euros.

The highest sale value of Fairtrade coffee and bananas in Switzerland for the year 1999 reached 3 and 15 millions Euros respectively.

In 1999, Switzerland witnessed the highest sales of Fraitrade coffe and bananas with 3 and 5 millions euros respectively.

FROM SIMON:

Here's the sentence that I wrote with my students:

In 1999, Switzerland had the highest figures for sales of both Fairtrade coffee and Fairtrade bananas, with 3 million and 15 million Euros of sales for the two respective products.

Many of you wrote good sentences, but I'll try to find some mistakes and I'll make a "correct the mistakes" lesson on Sunday.

year 1999
Switzerland
highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas
Fairtrade coffee sales: 3 million Euros
Fairtrade banana sales: 15 million Euros

Switzerland had the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas in 1999, at 3 million Euros and 15 million Euros respectively.

In Switzerland, the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas in 1999 is 3 million Euros and 15 million Euros respectively.

or,

In Switzerland, the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas in 1999 is 3 million Euros of Fairtrade coffee sales and 15 million Euros of Fairtrade banana sales.

In Switzerland, the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas in 1999 were 3 million Euros and 15 million Euros respectively.

or,

In Switzerland, the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas in 1999 were 3 million Euros of Fairtrade coffee sales and 15 million Euros of Fairtrade banana sales.

In 1999,Switzerland had the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas with 3 milion Euros and 15 milion Euros respectively

In the year 1999, Switzerland had the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas with 3 million and 15 million Euros, respectively,

Switzerland had the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas in the year of 1999, in which Fairtrade coffee sale rose up to 3 million Euros and Fairtrade bananas sale rose up 15 million Euros.

In 1999, the sale figures for Fairtrade coffee and banana in Switzerland was highest, at 3 million Euros and 15 million Euros respectively.

(Can we put an 's' after 'Euro'? I confuse a bit about singular and plural forms of currencies.)

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According to the report of agriculture publicized by the Ministry of Trade of Switzerland, in 1999 the country witnesses the highest sales of coffee and bananas from Fairtrade with 3 millions and 15 million Euro respectively.

In 1999, the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee earned 3 million Euro, while Fairtrade banana sales figured at 15 million Euro in Switzerland.

in switzerlan was the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and banana in 1999. In that period coffee earned 3 million and banana 15 million

In Switzerland, the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas were 3 million and 15 million Euros respectively.

In Switzerland, the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas were 3 million and 15 million Euros respectively in 1990.

Switzerland got highest sales of fairtade coffee and bananas at 3 million and 15 million respectively in 1999.

In 1999, Switzerland had the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas at 3 and 15 million Euros, respectively

In 1999, the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee were 3 milion Euros and bananas were 15 million Euros in Switzerland.

in the year 1999, the highest sales of fairtrade coffee and bananas in Switzerland were 3 million euros and 15 million euros respectively.

In 1999,the sales of fairtrade coffee and bananas were the highest in Switzerland at 3 million euros and 15 million euros respectively.

Pls can anyone check my sentence?

In 1999, Switzerland had the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas, about 3 million and 15 million Euros respectively.

Simon can you please comment on my writing?

Thank you everyone

In 1999, Switzerland's highest Fairtrade banana sales were 15 million euros, which were five times greater than the top sales of Fairtrade coffee sales at that year and it was only 3 million Euros.

In 1999, the fairtrade in switzerland was experiencing the highest sales period, among the fairtrade goods, one of the highest sales was banana which has been saled for 15 million Euros,followed by coffee, was 3 million Euros.

The highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas was recorded in Switzerland in 1999, The Fairtrade coffee sales recorded 3 million Euros, and Fairtrade banana sales recorded 15 million Euros.

switzerland, in 1999,witnessed the maximum sales for coffee and bananas in fairtrade ;the figures are three and fifteen million euros respectively.

switzerland had the highest figure of sale for fair-trade coffee and fairtrade bananas in 1990, where the sale of fair-trade banana, which was 15 million euros, was relatively much higher than the sale of fair-trade coffee ,which only made 3 million euros.


is this the correct way to state this information?

In 1999, Switzerland experienced the highest sells of Fairtrade coffee and bananas where the Fairtrade banana sales(15 million Euros) was five times the Fairtrade coffee sales(3 million Euros).

In 1999, there was a highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and banana in Switzerland at 3 million Euros and 15 million Euros respectively.

In this case, I don't think Switzerland to be a subject of the sentence.
In 1999, Sales of Fairtrade coffee and banana in Switzerland reached a peak of 3 million Euros and 15 million Euros respectively.

This is clear that, in 1999, with the cofee sales at 3 million euros and 15 millions euros of banana sales, Switzerland has the highest sales on both two products.

In 1999, Switzeland had the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and banana, at 3 million Euros and 15 million Euros respectively

In the year 1999, the highest sales of Faretrade coffee in Switzerland were 3 million Euros and 15 million Euros respectively

In 1999, Switzerland has the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas, at 3 million Euros and 15million Euros respectively.

In 1999 ,Switserland had the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas ,at €3 and € 15 million respectively.

In 1999, Switzerland saw the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and banana, at €3 and € 15 million respectively.

Switzerland reached to its highest sales of of Fairtrade coffee and bananas in the year 1999, respectively, 3 million Euros in coffee sales and 15 million Euros in banana sales.

The highest sales of Fairtrade coffee, 3 million Euros, and banana, 15 million Euros, was in Switzerland in year 1999.

In 1999, Switzerland had the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas, at 3 and 5 million of Eros respectively.

IT WAS IN 1999, IN WERE SWITZERLAND HAS THE HIGHEST SALE OF FAIRTRADE IN COFFEE AND BANANAS, 3M EUROS AND 5M EUROS RESPECTIVELY.

Switzerland had the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas, with sales of the two respective products reaching €3 million and €15 million in the year 1999

Switzerland saw the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas of 3 million and 15 million euro respectively in 1999.

In Switzerland the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee and banana was respectively 3 million euros and 15 million euros in 1999

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