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My answers:
1. dietary
2. human longevity
3. 1995
4. 115
5. 125
6. quality

Transcript:
For centuries people have been able to improve their lifespans through DIETARY changes, public health policies and other factors. However, a recent study from the Albert Einstein college of Medicine, it's found that the limits of HUMAN LONGEVITY may have already been reached. In fact, researchers believe that the maximum life span likely peaked decades ago around 1995. According to a news release issued by the school, the team used two different data sets: The human mortality database and the International database on longevity as the basis for the study. Based on the calculations, they concluded that humans can typically live a maximum of 115 years, but the absolute upper limit is likely 125 years. And while they acknowledge that medical breakthroughs could increase the average life expectancy, researchers believe the maximum will likely remain unchanged. As such, they suggested efforts should focus on improving the health and QUALITY of life, instead of trying to live longer.

dietary
human longevity
1995
115
125 years
healthy quality

Oh, I made a mistake. On line 8, it's "their" not "the".

Also, the last line, "instead of on trying" not "Instead of trying"

dietary
human longevity
1995
115
125 years
quality

i like the side

DIETARY
HUMAN LONGEVITY
1995
115
125 YEARS
QUALITY
I made mistake 1 out of five...

dietary
human longevity
1995
115
125 years
quality

dietary
human longevity
1995
115
125
health, quality

dietary
human longevity
1995
115
125
quality

dietary
human longevity
1995
115
125
quality

dietary
human longevity
1995
115
125 years
health and quality

dietary
human longevity
1995
115
125 years
health and quality

dietary
human longevity
1995
115
125 years
health quality

1. diary, 2. human longevity, 3. 1995, 4. 150, 5. 125, 6. quality

thanks

Actually don't understand how how to listen or write answers.

1. dietery
2. human longevity
3. 1995
4. 115
5. 125
6. quality

1. dietary
2. Human longevity
3. 1995
4. 115
5. 125
6. Quality

1.dietary
2.human longevity
3.1995
4.115
5.125
6.health and quality

Hi, I notice that some of the answers in the no. 6 above were MORE THAN TWO WORDS. Please note that the instruction says TWO WORDS AND/OR A NUMBER. In addition, some also answered no.5 incompletely without the word "years", please check or read the paragraph at the end of sentence number 4.

HERE ARE MY ANSWERS:
1. dietary
2. human longevity
3. 1995
4. 115
5. 125 years
6. quality health

dietary
human longevity
1995
115
likely 125 years
quality

1. Dietary
2. Human longevity
3. 1995
4. 115
5. 125 years
6. Quality

1. dietary
2. human longevity
3. 1995
4. 115
5. 125 years
6. quality

CORRECT ANSWERS FROM SIMON:

1. dietary
2. human longevity
3. 1995
4. 115
5. 125 (years)
6. quality

Hi KP,
I really like the way you criticise people but you have the wrong answers yourselves. Oh the irony, it's killing me...
Too bad for you, the answer No. 5 should be "125 (years)". You know why? READ THIS: "and that the absolute upper AGE limit is". The content itself has the word "age", why do you still have to force "years" into that?
Next, unfinished answer for No. 6? Are you kidding me? Have you read the transcript by me? (In case you don't know, it's the big chunk of words right under the lesson). In WHICH, "efforts should focus on improving the health and QUALITY of life, instead of trying to live longer.". You see that? Health and Quality of life. Have you EVER seen a phrase such as this? "HEALTH OF LIFE"? Because I HAVEN'T.
So, Please, next time, if you want to point out the flaws in anyone's argument or answers, make sure that you are RIGHT first. Thank you.

dietary
human longevity
1995
115
125 years
health and quality

Dietary
Human longevity (he pronounced different)
1995
115
125
Quality
Got to wrong spelling mistakes because of diffrent accent

1dietary
2.human longevity
3.1995
4.115
5.125
6.quality

1 dietary
2 human longevity
3 1995
4 115
5 125 years
6 healthy quality

dietary
human longevity
1995
150
125
health and quality

To: NKD
Great work on transcribing. Just a little note for you.
"However, a recent study from the Albert Einstein college of Medicine, it's found....." -> "it's found" should be "has found", don't you think?

Hi Hanna,
Oh yeah now I notice it. Should have revised the text. Thanks.

dietary
human longevity
1995
115
125
healthy quality

1. Dietary
2....
3.1995
4.115
5.125
6.healthy and quality

Dietary
Human longevity
1995
115
125
Quality

dietary
human longevity
1995
115
125
health quality

Dietary
human longevity
1995
115
125
health quality

@NKD
You did a good job! There are just a few things that I've noticed:
... a recent study from the Albert Einstein (How did you manage to hear this name? :) ) College of Medicine HAS found that ...
... they SUGGEST that ...

For centuries, people have been able to improve their life spans through dietary changes, public healthy policies and other factors.

However, a recent study from Albert Ilemsy college Medicine has found that limits of the human longevity may have already been reached.

In fact, researcher believe the maximum life span likely peaked decades ago around 1995. According to newsuly issued by the school, the team used two different data sets:the human mortality database and international database along longevity as the bases for study. Based on the calculation, they conclude that human can particularly live of maximum of 115 years, but the absolute upper limit is likely 125 years.

And while they are acknowledged of medical break through could increase average life expectancy,
researchers believe the maximum would likely remain unchanged. At such, they suggest the effort should focus on improving healthy and quality of life instead of trying to live longer.

dietary
human longevity
1995
115
125
health quality

My answers are:

1. dietary
2. human longevity
3. 1995
4. 115
5. 125
6. quality

dietary
human longevity
1995
115
125
quality

dietary
human longevity
1995
115
125
health and quality

dietary
human longevity
1995
115
125
healthy and quality

dietary
human longevity
1995
115
125
health and quality

dietary
human longevity
1995
115
121
average
health and quality

dietary
human longevity
1995
115
125
health and quality

dietary
human longevity
1995
115
125
quality/ health

1.Dietary 2. Human longevity 3. 1995 4. 115 5.125 6. health and quality

Dear Simon,

Please describe why the last gap fill answer is only quality and what is the reason for not being
health,quality or health /quality.

Dear Simon,

Please describe why the last gap fill answer is only "quality" and what is the reason for not being
"health,quality" or "health /quality".

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