Here's my full answer for the process diagram task below.
The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
(This task comes from Cambridge IELTS book 8)
The first diagram illustrates the process of cement manufacture, and the second diagram shows the materials that go into the production of concrete.
It is clear that there are five stages in the production of cement, beginning with the input of raw materials and ending with bags of the finished product. To produce concrete, four different materials are mixed together.
At the first stage in the production of cement, limestone and clay are crushed to form a powder. This powder is then mixed before it passes into a rotating heater. After heating, the resulting mixture is ground, and cement is produced. Finally, the cement is packaged in large bags.
Cement is one of the four raw materials that are used in the production of concrete, along with gravel, sand and water. To be exact, concrete consists of 50% gravel, 25% sand, 15% cement and 10% water. All four materials are blended together in a rotating machine called a concrete mixer.
(160 words, band 9)
quote:the resulting mixture is ground
Excuse me, what does GROUND mean here, is it working as a noun here?
Posted by: Skylar | October 26, 2018 at 00:13
Skylar
to grind: past= ground, participle= ground
https://www.ldoceonline.com/dictionary/grind
"grinded" does occur in some books, but is very much less common.
Posted by: cara | October 26, 2018 at 00:20
Simon sir,
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Posted by: Pachu | October 26, 2018 at 05:08
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Posted by: Rahul | November 02, 2018 at 08:13
Hi Simon, In the first paragraph shouldn't it be "the process of cement manufacturing?" instead of cement manufacture.
Thanks,
Posted by: ej | November 05, 2018 at 11:32
The two given diagram shows the process and the tools used to manufacture concrete, and how cement is engaged in manufacturing concrete for construction needs.
The first stage of producing cement is by crushing 2 martial namely Limestone and Clay after they are crushed they will go into a mixer along with the powder. Afterwards, all the mixed items will be processed in a rotating heater, where the heat is generated by a heater. The final step after the heating process is grinding, and then cement is ready to be bagged and shipped.
The second diagram draws attention to the formula of producing concrete by mixing 10%water, 15% cement, 25% sand, and 50% gravel into a concrete blender, then after the blind process is finished the concrete is ready for construction use.
Overall, there are five steps to produce cement. Also, in order for concrete to be produced, it requires at least 15% of cement.
Posted by: sami | November 18, 2018 at 21:05
Well done,
@sami
Posted by: M. Hasan | November 21, 2018 at 08:27
why did you write "crushed to form A powder"? Is 'powder' a countable noun?
Posted by: Long | June 21, 2019 at 14:51
Long,
'Powder' can be countable or uncountable. In this case I'm referring to "one particular type of powder" (countable), not an amount of powder (uncountable).
Posted by: Simon | June 26, 2019 at 18:45
Thank you, Simon!
Posted by: Long | June 27, 2019 at 14:04
Hello,
Please kindly make corrections and give an approximate of my band score.
Thank you!
The diagrams give information about the steps utilized in the manufacture of cement. It also illustrates how concrete is produced.
Overall, the process of making cement begins with two raw materials passing through five stages, and the packaging of the finished product in bags. For the production of concrete only four ingredients are required.
Lime stone and clay are introduced into a crusher which converts them to powder.
The powder passes through a mixer before entering the rotating heater. While in the rotating heater, it undergoes a constant rotatory motion with the simultaneous action of heat. The resultant material goes into a grinder to be ground into the finished product, cement.
The cement is then packaged into bags for use.
Four ingredients are required for the manufacturing of concrete, 15% cement being one of them. The remaining are : water ( 10%), sand (25%), and gravel (50%). These raw materials are put together into a concrete mixer to yield concrete.
Posted by: Jomy | December 24, 2019 at 12:53
Thank you for your lecture.
I changed this to "limestone and clay are crushed in powder" at first body.
Is it okay?
To be honest I don't get it "crushed to from a powder"
Thanks
Posted by: Annette Cho | January 08, 2020 at 07:43
Thank you for your model answer ,Mr Simon and thanks to everyone who contributes their thoughts and constructive ideas.
Regarding the clause 'limestone and clay are crushed ..',can we write ' limestone and clay are crushed into a powder"?
Thank you.
Posted by: [email protected] | March 10, 2020 at 07:56