Don't describe items on a graph or chart in terms of coming first, second or last. This makes it seem like you're describing a competition!
For example, don't write:
- Theme parks were first.
- Theme parks came first, and museums were in second place.
- In last place were wildlife parks and zoos.
Instead, you should write:
- Theme parks were the most popular type of tourist attraction.
- Theme parks attracted the highest proportion of visitors, and museums were the second most visited attraction.
- Wildlife parks and zoos were the least popular of the four types of tourist attraction.
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Can you please share your email address?
Mine is
fmushtaq99@yahoo.com
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Posted by: Dang | June 14, 2019 at 13:19
Hi Dang,
Congratulations. Can you share your email. Mine is
fmushtaq99@yahoo.com
I need some advice.
Faisal
Posted by: Faisal | June 14, 2019 at 14:55
Congratulations Dang! I'm glad my lessons helped you.
Posted by: Simon | June 20, 2019 at 13:30
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Posted by: Thien An | November 04, 2019 at 07:33