In last Thursday's lesson I asked you to suggest where we could add one extra detail to my 'fish pie' answer. I had forgotten to write that the pie is in a microwaveable container.
People suggested two sensible places to add this detail.
1) At the beginning of paragraph 2:
The fish pie contains salmon, peas, sauce and potatoes in a microwaveable container.
2) In the last sentence of paragraph 4:
The resulting fish pies are placed in microwaveable containers, wrapped, frozen and then stored or dispatched.
You found that you cannot find the book you were looking for. Later you came to know the book is available in a shop, next city. Write a letter to the Manager
- Which book (Awaken the giant within)
- Why you need it (Improve my personal skills)
- Payment methods (Credit card)
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inquire about the procedure for the online purchase of a book from your store.
I am looking for buying a book called Personal Power by Anthony Robbins, which falls under the category of self-help books. This book is about personality development and explains tools and strategies for overcoming certain psychological issues. Lately, it has been nominated as one of the best-sellers in the US.
I desperately need this book as I want to improve some of my personality traits; mindset is the major one. I have read reviews of this book online, and most readers have agreed that this book has changed their lives positively. So, I also want to see the massive improvements in my soft skills in a short time.
I would appreciate if you could guide me on how can I purchase this book from your store’s website. I tried to find the online payment option on your website but failed. Please send me the link for online payment so that I can buy the book using my credit card and get it as soon as possible.
I look forward to receiving your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Vishal Oza
Posted by: Jk | September 13, 2019 at 13:31