When writing a conclusion, this is what I do:
- I check the question again, because I want to make sure that I answer it properly (but briefly) in my conclusion.
- I also think about key words or phrases from the question that I could reuse or paraphrase.
- And I look at my introduction again. I want to make sure that the 'position' that I express in my conclusion is consistent with what I wrote in the introduction.
- I can also paraphrase what I wrote in my introduction when writing the conclusion.
Look at the question and the introduction that I showed you last week. Here are some of my thoughts before I write the conclusion:
- I'm going to start with 'In conclusion', and I want to write one concise sentence only.
- I need to repeat the idea that the benefits of genetic engineering outweigh the drawbacks (using different words).
- In my introduction I used a "while" sentence (while I accept the dangers, I believe the benefits...).
- So I'll start my conclusion with the benefits and then use the phrase "in spite of" to mention the dangers.
- Instead of "threat to life" or "dangers", I could write about the "risks".
- Instead of "improve people's lives", I could write that it will have a "positive impact".
Here's a concise conclusion using the ideas above:
In conclusion, I am convinced that genetic engineering will have a positive impact on our lives, in spite of its potential risks.
Thank you so much Simon :)
Posted by: Sunny | October 09, 2019 at 19:59
It is very useful, thank you, Simon
Posted by: Winson | October 09, 2019 at 23:52
Great post Simon!
So, don't we require to repeat the main ideas in the conclusion? If I use only one idea for each body paragraph, I mean 2 ideas for the whole essay, should I indicate my ideas in the introduction and conclusion?
I am referring to your essay on 'too many choices' where you mentioned the main ideas i.e. the internet and globalization in the introduction. I'm still a bit unsure whether it is acceptable to give the general response like X has a positive impact or a detrimental effect on Y in the introduction and conclusion.
I'd highly appreciate if you could shed some light on this point.
Posted by: Vishaal | October 10, 2019 at 07:58
Vishaal,
Sometimes I mention the main ideas in the conclusion, but usually I just summarise my overall 'position'. Both ways are fine.
Posted by: Simon | October 15, 2019 at 13:43